an ode to mel

[Oz]

it was just one line, but it inspired me... i dont know if you (or he) will like the result, but lemme know what you think.


Butterflies and Hurricanes


Writing in blue pen
on blue paper is a disguise.
Its one of the many
ways that I hide.
So I sit in the blue,
listening to Rosa Parks? lesson,
thinking of you,
wishing that you were here.
A man says what he sees,
something that makes sense:
Butterflies and Hurricanes.
It makes sense to me.




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"What about him? What are you doing with him?"
"What you should be doing with me..."

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I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned

"Om Namaha Shivaya." ~ Dano

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[gollum]

awesome.

someone should send the lil squirt over here so he can read it...

-g

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Sometimes i think everyone on this board is crazy. The rest of the time i'm sure. -Dan
somehow i see [gollum] clinging to a tower and rousingly calling for a new world order. -starky

would you forgive me
for hanging up on you
and crying myself to sleep

[neomel]

pretty good oz , feel free to plagarize me again in the future

the mel

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carpe diem
carpe noctem
carpe cerevisi

[~((resonance))~]

I LLLLLLLLOVE that first line!!!!!!!! I love it! I just do! Espcially since my favorite color is blue!

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